Halloween poem

I see slime. It slips and drips and slides and slithers down the stairs.
Bones crunch and crumble and flake under force.
Floorboards creak under feet.
Drip.
Blood bounces.
Doors creak. Doors screech.
“Trick or treat?”

4 Comments


  1. Hi Phoebe,
    I really liked this poem, it had almost a story line but it wasn’t so much so that you could still guess what was going on if that makes sense. I’m trying to say that it was very good!
    Chiara

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  2. I really liked this poem! It gives me chills reading it and I love the ending, it pulls it all together! Good job!
    Keep writing,
    Palesky

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  3. Hi Phoebe
    I really liked how you used a lot of alliteration and how you used the theme of Halloween. I also liked how you made it a question at the end because it made it very surprising.
    Keep on writing poems like this. I really enjoyed it.
    Lilly
    🙂

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  4. Hi Phoebe
    I really liked they way you structured and it felt so spooky!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

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